tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post5745693105751101767..comments2023-07-27T09:51:01.412+01:00Comments on Helen Lawless Lee: Magpie Tales # 69 ~ Spiral ~ Haikuhelenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04412509910451805109noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-67761187185301175242011-06-24T00:09:06.060+01:002011-06-24T00:09:06.060+01:00Excellent, perfect.Excellent, perfect.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-4407172267104596552011-06-23T06:33:59.174+01:002011-06-23T06:33:59.174+01:00This is a stunning haiku! Love!This is a stunning haiku! Love!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-54025502349648209002011-06-22T17:29:12.559+01:002011-06-22T17:29:12.559+01:00I love "primordial womb".I love "primordial womb".Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-10559442348730363292011-06-20T22:20:02.550+01:002011-06-20T22:20:02.550+01:00Beautifully shared haiku, just right with the rich...Beautifully shared haiku, just right with the richness of your words.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-81237799334548570602011-06-20T21:24:33.802+01:002011-06-20T21:24:33.802+01:00Haiku demands word rationing but this one got it a...Haiku demands word rationing but this one got it all in. And I agree, sea shells are feminine.Stafford Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-7652118279574946152011-06-20T20:23:28.364+01:002011-06-20T20:23:28.364+01:00"Post primoridal womb." What a gorgeous ..."Post primoridal womb." What a gorgeous phrase. It makes me re-examine something as simple as a seashell.Sioux Roslawskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17924021828536277618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-57174401654525473052011-06-20T14:10:25.485+01:002011-06-20T14:10:25.485+01:00A great haiku, very creativeA great haiku, very creativeEclipssehttp://eclipseofthemoon.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4417815227096434299.post-13159989738849970192011-06-18T22:16:28.635+01:002011-06-18T22:16:28.635+01:00That last line is a fabulous term to refer to. Nic...That last line is a fabulous term to refer to. Nice Haiku!Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.com